I must start saying that everyone’s composition for a movie scene is right in itself,
because is what you would like to hear for that images.
So, sounds are great, the score has got sense and it evolves in some manner,
introducin different instruments and phrases related with different events or
characters that happen in the scene. Your composition is good and it is nice to hear.
Having said that, in a constructive attitude, I would like to tell you some elements
that make me disagree with your option for this score.
- It is imperative to take care about not step over the dialogs.
- The music must stay in the background, only gaining presence when there is room for
- Beeing a chasing scene, I feel that I need a bigger intensity and maybe a faster
- Around minute 3:00 there is a too long almonst silenced music background, when we
are on one of the most emotive moments of the scene.
It’s only my opinion
Anyway, To finish a composition for video content, with a good job of analysing and timing it all is something to be praised for.