Listening to it again… now I found that you could justify the percussion elements to bring some attitude or to reinforce something. That isnt the case here. They distracted me as a listener… but main issue for me is the lack of a tempo… needs some percussion element to accentuate that (4/4 maybe…) Overall I reckon that you probably don’t need that percussion there unless it justifies being there. Chimers and/or cymbals work nicely there as they are Again only criticising as a listener and not as a composer. There’s no rules to how your music should sound like…
I think you are right. LOL. I think I’ll remove the percussive stuff. Not sure if I can make changes to the entry here, but I’ve removed the non cymbal/chime stuff from the session.
Thanks for the feedback. I definitely appreciate it!
You might be able to repost…
Your track is great and simplicity probably the best option for the theme… a piano or a few elements sometimes is all you need to make it a memorable track. I was humming to yours earlier so it worked somehow
I loved the composition, I like the pizzicato very much, as if it were the constant pass of time, the sound work and the combination of instruments is elegant and of great quality. The evolution of the piece is something of great level too